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Post by Fire Bear on Jun 24, 2010 22:52:40 GMT
I found this on paper while I was tidying my room. It proves that I have definitely improved as a writer, I was not all that innocent and that my teacher was an utter dolt, missing very obvious mistakes... I copied it onto a Word Document for all to see, word for word. (Almost - I corrected some of my grammar error and spelling errors.) It's taken me the best part of a week. It's a play so I've listed the characters at the start. In the square brackets I put the what the gods and goddesses are gods and goddesses of. If you catch my drift... Look, just read it... Attachments:
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Post by Spidey on Jun 28, 2010 20:16:44 GMT
The main thing I got from this is that the mum's having an affair with her brother-in-law. Or wants to.
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Post by Fire Bear on Jun 28, 2010 22:24:04 GMT
Um, no.
I think the point to the play is that Pluto is getting bullied. And the thing about Halloween and their costumes. I'm not entirely sure what the next scene would be. I have absolutely no idea where it was going.
All I know is that my teacher read that and didn't understand what I meant by Ancient Roman professor. He completely missed a "you're" when it should have been "your". And never commented on the sex.
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