mojojojoe
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The cold sweat in your breakfast
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Post by mojojojoe on Jun 8, 2008 1:52:04 GMT
Coco Pops A poem by Joe
It’s easy to imagine. Really. A room full of suits in a building That scrapes the underbelly of the sky. Beaded sweat running over agonising twisted Lips.
Stars, one says, racoons, says another, But heads shake impotently into the list of spent ideas. A tiger! one shouts with a twist of wit, And he’s sent out, Never seen again.
The milk sweats with them in the Tantalising cold. The box with the laughing, laughing Bastard Monkey
And then a start A thought No
No
An epiphany.
Wild eyed fever fingered tie hit with a straight dose of vitamin Viagra. Finger high in the air with an Einsteinian realisation, Heads lift in helium hope, The clouds peer on in curious wonder;
Breakfast cereal after school
There’s a pause.
And they cheer those fucking money hoarding greedy little bastards They fucking well
Cheer.
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Post by Someguy on Jun 8, 2008 13:33:09 GMT
Yeah, that reminds me; isn't this round about the time of year we send you off to Siberia for brain tuning?
By the way, did everyone else's last student loan payment come in? Mine's didn't, and now I'm up the creek of foul feces and £38 overdrawn charges (£136 in fines so far!).
Money grabbing bastards...DAMN YOU, RBS! DAMN AND CONFOUND YOU TO THE SEVENTH INNER CIRCLE OF HELL FROM WHICH THOUGHST SURELY CAME!!!!!
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kitty
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Post by kitty on Jun 8, 2008 15:29:53 GMT
I have no idea what you're trying to say or why you want to say it and a lot of lines don't work at all but goddamn
Coco Pops A poem by Joe
made me smile far too much. There almost doesn't need to be anymore after that.
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mojojojoe
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The cold sweat in your breakfast
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Post by mojojojoe on Jun 8, 2008 15:56:14 GMT
It's about the new Coco Pops advert. It's got two kids coming home from school and having a bloody breakfast cereal for a snack. I just sat there thinking what that decision must've been like. A boardroom full of people brainstorming for a new idea, then one person stops and thinks that breakfast cereal would be good for after school as well. Their profits would double!
And it just really really pissed me off.
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kitty
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Post by kitty on Jun 8, 2008 16:55:09 GMT
Oh god please stop.
I just cried from laughing. Such rage formed a poem! Oh it's too brilliant.
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